road to hell disabled coach closeupOnce upon a time, a hapless, yet terribly kindly and sympathetic King named Stephen, fortunately had a most unfortunate accident with his brilliantly bejeweled coach. Whilst traveling a country road on his way to visit an admittedly, beautifully buxomed princess who had been repeatedly proposed as potentially being the perfect complement for the unquestionably generous young royal, his overly gilted transport slipped into a ditch.

Stranded alone on the hellishly unpaved road for more than a week, the gangly ruler quickly became aware of an unsightly creature that indubitably resembled the reputedly infamous devil himself. Indeed, while cautiously waiting for his painfully shy page to return with help, King Stephen found it quite impossible to ignore how every evening at precisely midnight, Beelzebub, the name by which the furiously frightful beast had introduced himself on day six, slowly picked his way past the noble on his way home, but only after momentarily stopping before the royal coach, vehemently slinging an obviously excruciatingly heavy canvas tote over his questionably muscular shoulder, and reluctantly describing what he wearily called, “a grueling day of soul searching.”

When, on the eighth night of this repeatedly innocuous intrusion upon the monarch’s ponderings over how to proceed with his life once the coach was fixed, King Stephen stepped up and asked the man why he subjected himself to such misery, the demon answered, “The problem isn’t that this decidedly dreadful experience of hounding potentially slovenly spirits wandering aimlessly about the writing world doesn’t bring me great joy, it’s just that this massively overweight satchel filled with their excessive use of adverbs is slowly killing me!”

“Why not simply lay your burden down?” said Stephen the King. “Leave them to their hideously just desserts.”

“Harrumpf!” cried the beast, decidedly dissatisfied for not thinking of this himself. Yet, faster than a buccaneer might chug a mug of ale, he heaved the satchel onto the road. “From this day forth, I solemnly swear on my mother’s maddeningly grotesque unmarked grave that I shall regularly renounce weak adverbs and replace them with strong verbs every chance I get.”

road to hell-adverbs dancing devil

“Now, that feels better, doesn’t it?” cried Stephen the King, waving at the figure dancing down the lane.

Moments later, the page returned with the village smith, a new wheel in hand. “Sire, forgive me for my tardiness, but -”

Stephen the King waved a hand. “Never mind, boy. Fetch me a scribe. I’ve a marvelous idea for a book. For indeed, the road to hell is paved with adverbs.”


Clearly, the devil is in the D-tails


pointedly a yarn, for yet another day.

There are so many books on writing advice in the world today 
(Oops! There’s another two dreadful adverbs! Who knew? I certainly didn’t until today.)
What’s your favorite?
Not adverb.
You already know mine.

*special thanks to Ig0rzh  for the ‘Road to Hell’ photo I changed to suit my needs

About Donna Gwinnell Lambo-Weidner

I am an adventure seeking ponderer of the mysteries of the universe, writer of children's books (represented by Stephen Fraser of the Jennifer DeChiara Literary Agency), and lover of anything involving armor, archery, or swashbuckling.
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  1. Susanne says:

    Holy funny! Even wholly funny.

    Stephen King’s “On Writing” is the first book on writing I ever read, long before I thought I was a writer. Ann Lamott’s Bird by Bird sits side by side with King.


  2. A.PROMPTreply says:

    My goodness! An onslaught for sure…..had no idea where you were going with this, but you’re right! Another great story, Donna. Your mind never quits! (Do also love that pic!)


  3. That was awesome! Overuse of adverbs – another source of anxiety. Great ;-).


  4. vic says:

    wow! that was “utterly” and “overwhelmingly” exhausting!


  5. Don Royster says:

    I am pretty sure you did not write this zestfully. Am I wrong?


  6. Diana says:

    Where do you come up with this stuff.? Love your picture. Almost bought that helmet today.


  7. staceywilk says:

    That was fun. Thank you for slicing those adverbs at the end. They weighed heavy in my arms. A great resource: Writing the Breakout Novel Workbook by Donald Maas.


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